Tuesday, January 16, 2007

Air

the
sun
bird
waving
in
the
tortured
sky
flailing
on
a
current
made
of
toxic
exhaust
fan
smoke

2 Comments:

Anonymous Anonymous said...

Very nice. I love minimalist poetry - it can be so much more powerful than a word piece.

I'm in the process of compiling a photo essay on Windsor's factory culture (should be done by March-ish. The best pictures of the factories, and their craptitude, come around season changes. I'll post it when I'm done.

1/17/2007 11:44 PM  
Blogger neil said...

Thanks J. Seems like my better efforts are of the ‘accidental’ variety. This one was a total spur-of-the-moment-stream-of-unconsciousness nugget that I spun before hitting the sack…I guess I’m still capable of surprising myself from time to time. Looking forward to that photo essay…great subject, and you certainly can’t be lacking for inspiration…

Knowing your lovehatelove attitude towards your hometown, it should be very interesting…and no doubt will be great!

*If your reading this and you haven’t checked out J’s ‘Disposable Chronicles’ blog, do yourself a favour, hit the link on the right side of my page and read his 5 part ‘Reflections…’ series…the man’s got plenty of wit, heart and soul…and dude can write.

1/18/2007 2:08 AM  

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