Thursday, May 15, 2008

rearview reflection

Honed away from home
Counting sides counting sides
Thinking since last century
Weighed down with consciousness

amid a sea of dastardly means and ends
Bending but not breaking
Seeing sick
Eyes rolled back
Right side paralyze
Vulnerable to the finish
Crossing lines in the sand

2 Comments:

Blogger Cowboy said...

This is good Neil. You should do more like this.

5/18/2008 2:34 PM  
Blogger neil said...

thanks J.

5/28/2008 9:47 PM  

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